MEGACITIES
Nowadays we are increasing population in a very high rate all over the world, and megacities will be a real problem in th
In conclusion, not always depends on you where to live, but if you have that rare opportunity that life can bring you from time to time, take a breather in order to have a better life.
MEGACITIES
Although they have a lot of entertainment, as theatres, cinemas and in many cases, sport events, these kinds of cities do not offer the most important of all, the mental and physical health.
Depending on every person´s opinion there are different disadvantages, mainly pollution, which is unlikely to disappear, civil security, burglary, mugging and any kind of thefts increase little by little in these cities, and housing, price of a place to live, not too far from the work place are the most appreciate problems people believe they have.
Apart from these, other problems might be the distance between sites, despite having a good public transportation network, such as undergrounds or buses, people usually spend too much time commuting to work.
It is believed that living in megacities can affect your life in different features and everyone should give a value to every aspect of the problem.
In conclusion, not always depends on you where to live, but if you have that rare opportunity that life can bring you from time to time, take a breather in order to have a better life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74051034945 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8931590494 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.4 76.5299724578 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.8 16.8248392259 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.2 4.34317383033 327% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320047526213 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161281899168 0.0766984524023 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163029711434 0.0603063233224 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157656328151 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165536724011 0.0580467560999 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 8.37731958763 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 70.7449484536 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 7.45979381443 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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