On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:Describe the item you lostExplain how you lost itTell the insura

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in order to enquire about the possibility to cover the cost of my cell phone, which I have lost during my vacation at the Resort Spa Hotel while staying there in October.
To begin with, my telephone is brand new of Samsung make, bought 2 months ago. Moreover, it is of white color from outside and its screen is made from Gorilla glass.
Speaking about where it can be, I suppose the phone could fall down below the bed in the hotel room I was in. While collecting my things for the trip back, I was in a hurry not to be late, so I was not attentive and lost it over there.
So, I am asking you kindly could your company, please, pay me back for the lost item as the contract mentions? The telephone price was $3000.
Here is my mobile for further details + 70657897654
Thank you in advance.
Sincerely,
Ann Hathaway

Votes
Average: 8 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...taying there in October. To begin with, my telephone is brand new of Samsung mak...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, it is of white color from outside and its screen is made from Gorilla glass. ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, while, i suppose, speaking about, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31901840491 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24492951044 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5230108302 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17499376103 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593819160833 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082931204952 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978215626487 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897018729505 0.0580467560999 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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