Recently your employer offered some employees to do some work directly from home. Write a letter to your manger requesting the same arrangement. You should say– Why do you want to work from home?– Why would it be beneficial for the company and yourself.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this application to let you know about my interest to avail the opportunity to work from resident. Allow me to explain why this facility interests me a lot.
Few weeks back, my wife gave birth of a baby and she is still not fit enough to take responsibilities of family matters. Meanwhile, appointing a nurse is very expensive. At the same time, you know the traffic condition in the road is not good as well. As a result, after travelling long time and return to my living place, I fail to give time to my child which is unexpected from a father.
If the facility is provided then it is possible to give more effort for completion of tasks as I do not have to waste time on road which will be good for our firm. On the other hand, a tension free working environment will be ensured as I will be able to remain with my family members. I just need to have a desktop computer and a modem which is expected to be provided by the office.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours
Jack
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, then, well, while, you know, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35567010309 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57226824576 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2334154381 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8181818182 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17176493399 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619730604213 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04633071886 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104086200712 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382354055401 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.