Recently your employer offered some employees to do some work directly from home. Write a letter to your manger requesting the same arrangement. You should say
– Why do you want to work from home?
– Why would it be beneficial for the company and yourself?
– Suggest a suitable arrangement for you to work from home.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this application to let you know that I am very much keen to avail the facility of working from house and right at this moment, I am really in need of this opportunity. Allow me to explain the situation first.
Couple of weeks ago, I became father and my wife is still not fit enough to care of family matters. Meanwhile, I have appointed a nurse which is very expensive. You know traffic condition in the road is not good also. I have to travel more than two hours to reach office and after finishing working time traffic condition becomes very bad. So, after travelling long time and coming back to my living place, I cannot give time to my family and fail to take care of my child which is very disappointing as a father.
If I get the opportunity to work from my home then it is possible to give more effort to tasks as I do not have to waste time on road. On the other hand, a tension free working environment will be ensured as I will be able to remain with my family members.
So, from office if I get a desktop computer and a modem, then it is very much possible to provide service from my resident.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours
Jack
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...affic condition in the road is not good also. I have to travel more than two hours t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, so, still, then, while, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30701754386 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40889714858 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9093889988 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8333333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153018572707 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590358807339 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529112899313 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960861848898 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469683342217 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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