Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letterIntroduce yourself,explain what the problem is, suggest solutions to the problem

Essay topics:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter

Introduce yourself,explain what the problem is, suggest solutions to the problem

Dear Sir/Madam,

This is Nimish, residing at 4411, Dunwoody Gables Drive, Block 4 Street and I am writing to you with regards to the disturbance caused by ongoing construction of the steel bridge.

I understand that the bridge is for the safety of the people and will solve many traffic problems in our area. However, the residents are facing difficulty in moving freely on the streets due to ongoing construction work. The machines such as cranes, stone crusher are left open and unattended that occupies most of the area of the footpath. Some of us have faced problems in parking their vehicles.
I request you if you could instruct workers to move their appliances to a safer place after day's work is completed that will prevent us from any casualty. In addition, if work can be paused around 7 in the evening since most of the families have senior citizens and kids who are not able to bear the noisy atmosphere.
I request you to kindly take some action immediately to stop the noise and allow us to live a peaceful life.

Yours sincerely,
Nimish

Votes
Average: 3.3 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...unwoody Gables Drive, Block 4 Street and I am writing to you with regards to the ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76756756757 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55273668299 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0431912217 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191930013637 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696806827135 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344729978158 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947260369555 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106979052537 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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