Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Moushumi Shema. I'm working as a Radio Frequency Engineer in Banglalink at Dhaka, Bangladesh. I have learned about your upcoming seminar about 'Telecommunication Technology in Future' in a techno website and which will be held in Germany. I would like to attend this seminar, besides I need some information regarding seminar.
Firstly, I would like to know when the seminar will be held. Because that website did not mention any specific dates for the seminar. It will be helpful if you mention the time length of the seminar and are you provide any lunch or dinner.
Secondly, I would also want to know about the registration cost and the accommodation facilities. If you are not provided any accommodation then please suggest me a better hotel which is close where the seminar will be held. Inasmuch, I have no relative in Germany. So, I need to arrange a place to live and overall cost.
It will be benefited if you provide all this necessary information at the earliest time.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully
Moushumi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ir/Madam, My name is Moushumi Shema. Im working as a Radio Frequency Engineer i...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cost and the accommodation facilities. If you are not provided any accommodation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98913043478 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85873698102 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6252687846 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5714285714 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139648248485 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466766199321 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498240750306 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701522019862 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437156448471 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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