WRITING TASK 1 – General Writing IELTS
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words.
Dear …………………,
I appreciate that you’ve agreed to take care of my home and my cat when I’m away on my vacation. I’m really thankful to you for this gesture.
As discussed in our call today, I will be in London for a week and will be staying at Hilton Palace Hotel. You can call me through hotel reception if there is anything that you need to pass on to me during this time. I’ve texted you the hotel’s telephone no. in your Whatsapp.
About my cat, please give it food only three times a day. I’ve clearly marked the time and quantity of food that should be fed on the cover of each packet. You can easily locate them on the shelf near main door.
One thing that I want to remind you is to water my flowers inside my house. They are to be watered daily in the evening.
Finally, please don’t forget to clear my mailbox every day. Once again, thank you so much for your assistance.
Best wishes,
A
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...'s telephone no. in your Whatsapp. About my cat, please give it food only t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... One thing that I want to remind you is to water my flowers inside my house. Th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, so, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58959537572 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66708985694 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670520231214 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.148310981 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.7142857143 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3571428571 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142965897364 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581872313874 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550388436607 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067566985038 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040741982628 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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