You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter. give details of your visit to the restaurant. explain the reason

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter
. give details of your visit to the restaurant
. explain the reason for the celebration
. say what was good about the food and the service.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam,

Hello. This is Darby who visited one of your restaurants, “The Kaku” which is located on the George Street. I am writing this letter to appreciate you about wonderful meals that my friends and I had in dinner and your great service on the last Saturday night.

I often go to your place with my family or friends. I love your food and a reasonable price such as Sushi, Donburi and Ramen. However, at this time, I went there with some of my best friends to celebrate my birthday.

Firstly, I would like to say that thank you so much because you provided us great view seats although we did not book and it was very crowded at that time. My friends and I really appreciate you regarding it. Secondly, I could not believe that you made us special food which is not on your menu for my birthday and I cannot forget the taste.

Once again, thank you very much for your cuisine and service. I will never forget my last birthday.

Yours faithfully,

Darby.

Votes
Average: 9.3 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o your place with my family or friends. I love your food and a reasonable price s...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irthday and I cannot forget the taste. Once again, thank you very much for your...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'really', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211538461538 0.220444632235 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.120192307692 0.167888034529 72% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0432692307692 0.0606518309736 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0865384615385 0.0506257000042 171% => OK
Pronouns: 0.163461538462 0.118615021944 138% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0961538461538 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0192307692308 0.041066498444 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.35394992447 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192307692308 0.0385302599488 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0480769230769 0.0714148451538 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0192307692308 0.0191574576366 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0144230769231 0.00930345855455 155% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 995.0 1141.60824742 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.134020619 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52777777778 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.283333333333 0.284621296913 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.194444444444 0.211203875043 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116666666667 0.133321485273 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0722222222222 0.0843313296314 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35394992447 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622163163488 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.599530198 62.8969750728 98% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.4300151701 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3022290636 44.7399317507 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9166666667 90.9928171075 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.4300151701 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.613754768223 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 7.22680412371 55% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Readability: 34.4444444444 37.5504026743 92% => OK
Elegance: 0.883116883117 1.13073093955 78% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380034098748 0.331212695627 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.074328783976 0.0927372745006 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0634822842561 0.0736520305886 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542679811178 0.662452444078 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175621229694 0.233577193048 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129967396226 0.122183219658 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891537412247 0.0765303033291 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.212605667899 0.110270004696 193% => Paragraphs have same ideas.
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0337831272117 0.120535355502 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234601095449 0.120397337282 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060330771935 0.113578534861 53% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.45360824742 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 4.54639175258 198% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.0824742268 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.62886597938 38% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.25773195876 121% => OK

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9