You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:Give details of your visit to the restaurantExplain the reason f

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

Give details of your visit to the restaurant
Explain the reason for the celebration
Say what was good about the food and the service.
Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

Good day! I am Maria Judith Parayno, from Antipolo City one of your customer on your restaurant here also located in Antipolo. I wrote this letter because me and my collegues are very pleased with the food and service.

My friends and I went to your restaurant last April of 12th 2017, to held a small special celebration and that is actually for the success of my friend to pass her board exam in Nursing. The event was supposed to start at exactly 3 o'clock in the afternoon, so we arrive earlier around 30 minutes before the time and we are surprised that everything was all set and ready. In addition to that, you allow us to have a meal and celebrate early. Also we are very surprised and amazed about the food because it is well prepared and looks and taste yummy. All of the recipes and menus that we picked was all tasty, so my collegues including me was very pleased with the food. As well as the customer service it is also satisfying because all of the crew are smiling, friendly an approachable. So i just want to tell you that we are really satisfied for your services and foods.

Thank you for the good service . We will be back soon.

Respectfully yours,

Maria Judith

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...vent was supposed to start at exactly 3 oclock in the afternoon, so we arrive earlier ...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... us to have a meal and celebrate early. Also we are very surprised and amazed about ...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ell prepared and looks and taste yummy. All of the recipes and menus that we picked was al...
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Line 5, column 706, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ood. As well as the customer service it is also satisfying because all of the crew are smiling, fr...
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Line 5, column 733, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...r service it is also satisfying because all of the crew are smiling, friendly an approacha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 771, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...e all of the crew are smiling, friendly an approachable. So i just want to tell you that we are...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oods. Thank you for the good service . We will be back soon. Respectfully ...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Respectfully yours, Maria Judith
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, look, really, so, well, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50909090909 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39538810106 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4427598011 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244745218207 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803559914778 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628184275268 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156552492511 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744028573918 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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