You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to formal teacher In your letter Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.

Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :

Give detail of the job

Explain why it is important to you

Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Mrs Benz,
I am writing this letter to you for informing you that I have found a new job and asking for a reference letter and I hope it would help me to get my dream job.

As I have passed last semester on C# programming course with you, I have got a job offer from a famous software company. Have you heard Of SAA Company? They needed a C# Developer and I have sent my resume then, fortunately, it is accepted.
Software programming is my dream job, in fact, it is one of my wishes from childhood especially working at such a creditable Company.

An assistant in the SAA Company mentioned some issues that which letter should contain; first of all, they need your name, phone number and email address to contact you. Perhaps, you can mention that in the letter. May I suggest that written about the related courses which I am fully skilled in them? It might help the Company to make a better decision about my job position.

I am really thankful for your time and I hope to see you again.

Sincerely yours,

Maryam.

Votes
Average: 9.1 (4 votes)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'in fact', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215962441315 0.220444632235 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.178403755869 0.167888034529 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0422535211268 0.0606518309736 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0422535211268 0.0506257000042 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.150234741784 0.118615021944 127% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0985915492958 0.107062808482 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0610328638498 0.041066498444 149% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44403212354 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234741784038 0.0385302599488 61% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.075117370892 0.0714148451538 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018779342723 0.0191574576366 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0093896713615 0.00930345855455 101% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1027.0 1141.60824742 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.134020619 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43386243386 5.53046319177 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291005291005 0.284621296913 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201058201058 0.211203875043 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126984126984 0.133321485273 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0740740740741 0.0843313296314 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44403212354 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613756613757 0.622163163488 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.8669932842 62.8969750728 94% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1818181818 16.4300151701 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.830115352 44.7399317507 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 90.9928171075 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.4300151701 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.613754768223 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 37.2876382876 37.5504026743 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.01265822785 1.13073093955 90% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398027909545 0.331212695627 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122464419087 0.0927372745006 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0710843387855 0.0736520305886 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.680664169865 0.579516596996 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.225255624531 0.180689518051 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145113669318 0.122183219658 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929509805174 0.0765303033291 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.156285183928 0.211926503985 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0408036528968 0.0737400523855 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213568515205 0.203819188451 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973478939754 0.067151250289 145% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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