You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter, give details of the job, explain why it is important to you, suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference.
Dear Mr. Weber,
I hope you are fine and doing great. I am John, have completed graduation in Computer Science at Texas University in 2016. I am writing this letter to request you to arrange a reference letter which is required for a job interview. I am planning to apply for a job at ABC Info-tech Pvt Ltd which is a software company at Silicon Valley.
They are having vacancies for Software Engineers and recruited employee will get chance to work on Banking Applications which is going to be challenging. I am very much excited for this opportunity because I can get a chance to work in which I am actually interested. I heard, growth in this company is enormously good and package which basically they offer to freshers is as per my expectation. This opportunity is really important for me to start my carrier and to get valuable experience in Software industry.
I will be glad if you can mention about my academic performances, involvement in other activities such as sports and drama competitions in the reference letter which will help me to improve my chances to get the job.
I appreciate your assistance in this matter.
Your Sincerely,
Mr. John Brown
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er Science at Texas University in 2016. I am writing this letter to request you t...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which is required for a job interview. I am planning to apply for a job at ABC I...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81773399015 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93261951596 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9091737042 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173662694123 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703981328319 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805123872153 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104898149962 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635179567931 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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