You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:-Explain your situation-Describe your problems-Tell him/her when you think you can start

Essay topics:

You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
-Explain your situation
-Describe your problems
-Tell him/her when you think you can start

Dear Mr. Ancheta:

I have been recently accepted for the Process Engineer position in your department. We have settled an agreement for me to start on the following week. However, due to some unavoidable circumstances, I regret to inform you that I could not able to present myself on that time.

Bad timing it is, I have been sick these past few days now and I was not able to come and finish my activities in my previous employer. While they already found my replacement, I still did not take part in transferring other pending task to him.

If you wish to validate my excuse, I can give you the medical records I have with my doctor and that I could not leave the hospital at the moment. Despite my situation, I am still eager to continue my employment in the company. But I need to turn-over first the status of my projects to my replacement. After that, I can already be available to come in your office three weeks from now.

I apologize for the inconvenience it has caused you. I hope this will not affect our relationship. If you need to talk more about this, please do not hesitate to contact me through my mobile number 09067269173.

Yours faithfully,
Fiona Joanna V. Cruz

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58139534884 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74129133885 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7994432922 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7692307692 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233970843051 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081032716855 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586615658563 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1315166321 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631624107525 0.0580467560999 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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