You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late Write a letter to your landlord In your letter explain Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent

Essay topics:

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.

In your letter explain:

Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When you will pay the rent.

Dear Mr. Tom,
I am writing this letter because I would like to ask you if l can pay my rent within two months . As you know I have been so committed to paying my rent regularly since I rented my flat . Unfortunately, l am having hard times nowadays; as I lost my job two weeks ago after I had an argument with my manager about work-related issues. Hence, I don’t have enough money to pay the rent now. However, I promise you to pay it within two months. l applied my resume to many companies and I had a couple of interviews. Hopefully I will have got a suitable job in two months time. Besides, I am waiting to receive financial aid from a rich relative of mine soon. I really appreciate your understanding to my situation and I deeply apologise for this unintentional delay in paying the monthly rent.
Regards,
Nisreen

Votes
Average: 7.8 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...u if l can pay my rent within two months . As you know I have been so committed to...
^^
Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...my rent regularly since I rented my flat . Unfortunately, l am having hard times n...
^^
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...nce I rented my flat . Unfortunately, l am having hard times nowadays; as I lost m...
^^
Line 2, column 446, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: L
...romise you to pay it within two months. l applied my resume to many companies and...
^
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay in paying the monthly rent. Regards, Nisreen
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onthly rent. Regards, Nisreen
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, really, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45098039216 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80347636135 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9111403328 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257514022992 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975874435649 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989465176789 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260485499585 0.12726935374 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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