You are a student who wants to apply to green pines college. you are experiencing financial problems at the moment.Write a letter to the principal of the college . explaining your situation. ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e student and I would like to apply for a undergraduate degree at green pines but...
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...able to make any progress at the moment.  Secondly, I would really appreciate if y...
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...criteria under Federal Education Scheme.  Finally, I would be glad if you can drop...
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...s of America for international students.  I am looking forward to hearing from you...
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...ooking forward to hearing from you soon.  Yours Faithfully  FaizalReza   
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Suggestion:
...ring from you soon.  Yours Faithfully  FaizalReza   
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... soon.  Yours Faithfully  FaizalReza   
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08282255513 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688311688312 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 16.3608247423 312% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.128207543 44.8134815571 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.0 76.5299724578 348% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 16.8248392259 305% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.6666666667 4.34317383033 660% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258252961936 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163663075887 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418934093471 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123688119059 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561677293895 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 8.37731958763 341% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 70.7449484536 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 7.45979381443 311% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 7.59969072165 141% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 8.54432989691 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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