You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter•Explain where you live•Describe the problem•Give reasons why you do n

Essay topics:

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
• Explain where you live
• Describe the problem
• Give reasons why you do not want this development

I am writing in connection with your published article about development of local airport dated on 24th, June.
I live in Bringtone Street which is located in airport neighborhood. As you know, we are countering many troubles so by doing these extensions this conditions will be worsen.

The first problem is noise pollution which is made by airplanes when they are taking on and off. Passengers and their attendance are also another factor for intensifying this situation that is very disturbing.

Another serious problem is overcrowding and traffic that is made by people and their cars in main street and neighborhood streets as well as lacking of parking space causes persecuting residents.

Finally, as you are aware there is no park or recreational facilities in this area for people who live in this region.
These problems are serious, so please reflect these issues to responsible persons to bring in mind.

Yours faithfully,
Mitra Riahi

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, well, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26623376623 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86166259982 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694805194805 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4165828302 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1111111111 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186367199569 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706757749313 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547963737297 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773173950914 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642608738552 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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