You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw Write a letter to the company In your letter Introduce your self explain the situation say what action you would like to company to take

Dear Sir

I am writing this letter to inform you about some defects in my recently purchased laptop from your outlet. I have bought Sony Vaio E-Series PC with model no. vpcea33en

I visited your City Central outlet last week and made this purchase. After returning home I started using it and I found that its wifi feature is not working while connecting it to the internet. I tried to toggle the wifi switch on and off to make sure it's turned on properly but it didn't work. Moreover, later I realised that even Bluetooth is not functional. Then I shut down the system and packed it as it is.

Now I want you to replace my laptop and provide me with a new piece of the same model or get me the refund for this. This product is absolutely new and under warranty so I hope there wouldn't be any problem.

Please help me with this and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

Thanking you

Yours sincerely

Param Sabharwal

Votes
Average: 8.2 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...E-Series PC with model no. vpcea33en I visited your City Central outlet last w...
^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...make sure its turned on properly but it didnt work. Moreover, later I realised that e...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... new and under warranty so I hope there wouldnt be any problem. Please help me with ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48275862069 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30097602893 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695402298851 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9121619869 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9090909091 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165642903738 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055714211263 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615743429677 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867950239638 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665801031944 0.0580467560999 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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