You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter:– Explain why you are writing– Explain why you have decided to leave the company– Tell your employer what you plan to do after l

Essay topics:

You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter:

– Explain why you are writing
– Explain why you have decided to leave the company
– Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment

Dear Mr.Berry,

I am writing this letter in relation with my resignation that I had submitted yesterday through the office website. As per the office regulations, the notice period will be sixty working days and according to that my last working day falls on 30th June.

Due to a few personal reasons, I had to quit my job. As I have to look after my ailing father in Chennai, my entire family has decided to move to the city. Moreover, my husband and me have wanted to settle in the city since long time. Furthermore, I have wanted to take a break from my profession for the past few months. Hence, thought the departure would mean a great loss to me, pursuing my career in our organisation will not be possible anymore.

After I get adapted to the new lifestyle and the place, I would like to either join a part-time job or takeover the family business that my father had been running.

Finally, I would like to thank you for all the valuable experience that you have provided me through the company.

Thanking you,

Yours sincerely,
Janani.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Berry
Dear Mr.Berry, I am writing this letter in relatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65957446809 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54628942967 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0627845689 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145108645729 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669508903146 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836183985308 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692829490677 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592819184126 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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