You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:•introduce yourself•describe your plans for the party•invite your neighbor to

Essay topics:

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbor to come

I am your next door neighbor. As you may have already noticed, we have recently settled in this flat. Therefore, I have not the opportunity to be acquainted with you yet. In fact, we are a family of three: me, my wife and our 8 years old child.

The following Sunday is going to be my son’s birthday; hence, my spouse and I have decided to celebrate with family and friends on that special night in our apartment. The party will commence on 7:00 pm and terminate around midnight. It will consist of some music and dancing indoors in which a small music band will also be attending; however, dinner will be served about 10:00 o’clock in the garden. Although the participants are comparatively limited, we are afraid to bother you by late night noises.

On the other hand, I had initially intended to invite you and your family to our ceremony by phone, but I hesitated whether it could be a good idea or not. After consulting with my wife, she suggested it would be more appropriate if I write a letter to do so.

We will be deeply pleased in case you kindly accept my invitation to our beloved one’s celebration. In this way, not only find we the chance to become familiar with you, but the gathering might also perturb you less.

[Collected Sample]

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, in fact, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62555066079 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65162378479 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63436123348 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2749730505 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156679075658 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633954153384 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767799209518 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106309460328 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631417342347 0.0580467560999 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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