You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Dear John,

I hope this letter find you and your family well. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have left my wallet last holiday at your home.

This was one of my memorable holidays that I have ever experienced. You and your wife performed everything in the best mood regarding making this period unique for us. Not only foods were extremely tasty, but really took advantage of your stunning garden with those ripe fruits. So, I profusely acknowledge for whatever you did.

As you might remember, although our flight was taking off in one hour, we were still at your home. Thus, we were in a hurry to pack our luggage and get to airport taxi as soon as possible. Hence, I presume that I have fallen down my wallet between sofas. Today, I want to cash a check at the bank that I found out that it is not in my pocket.

Indeed, I am intensively in need of my identity and credit card. Therefore, I would appreciate if you could post it by an express post service since it is not only remarkably fast, but it is also noticeably reliable. I hope to see you soon again.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Jack

Votes
Average: 5.1 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope this letter find you and your fam...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om you soon. Yours sincerely, Jack
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4537037037 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37174439343 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0821168601 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1333333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341493335791 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111508121029 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084790403703 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186400867598 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905042003279 0.0580467560999 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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