You have recently enrolled in a part-time course in a university. Write a letter to the dean about something you are not pleased with.> describe your course> express your feelings about the course> give suggestions regarding what the universit

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You have recently enrolled in a part-time course in a university. Write a letter to the dean about something you are not pleased with.
> describe your course
> express your feelings about the course
> give suggestions regarding what the university should do

Dear sir,

I am not content with the part-time course that I have recently enrolled in. I am writing this letter to express my complaints and request you to take measures to tackle the issue.

The course is mainly about a variety of complex algorithms that are beneficial to the enhancement of our logical thinking skills. However, the majority of students have difficulty in assimilating such a large amount of information. In addition, the course also overemphasizes on theories or conceptual knowledge, which plays no role in enhancing our practical skills. As a consequence, numerous students find the course tedious, thereby having inadequate concentration in the class.

In light of such facts, I would like to suggest you to make the course more compelling and less difficult. For instance, the course should provide students with a more specific account of how the algorithms are applied in the real world. Furthermore, some advanced knowledge ought to be removed, as the information has no implication for future employment.
I hope that the situation will be dealt with as soon as possible. If you require further information, you can contact me by email.

Yours sincerely,

David.

Votes
Average: 7.6 (3 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26943005181 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03173014766 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663212435233 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.113591171 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284653367576 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897177475831 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599742904692 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149161898099 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635828100014 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

flaws:
No. of Words: 193 250

Need one paragraph to describe the course, but there is only one sentence:

'The course is mainly about a variety of complex algorithms that are beneficial to the enhancement of our logical thinking skills.'

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 193 250
No. of Characters: 969 1200
No. of Different Words: 128 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.727 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.021 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.922 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.022 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.293 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.642 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4