You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter
- Give your reasons for wanting the job
- Explain why you think you can do the job
- Describe any relevant experience you have
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to apply for the job as local tourist guide.
I am a second year student of journalism faculty in Western University. Now I am on long holidays and for near 2 months we do not have any lessons. So I decided to try myself with tourists. Besides if I am suitable for this position, it will be extra earning which I will keep for next year education.
I am social, proactive person and like to be in the center. Besides I am very well informed about local and historical sightseeing of our country. So I think these my skills could be appropriate for this job.
At the university I performed in most projects and my projects was interested by audience. As I do not have any phobia of performance I always managed to get high mark. That’s why for me it will not be hard to cope with this job.
I am looking forward to discussing my credentials with you personally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
... I decided to try myself with tourists. Besides if I am suitable for this position, it ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...ve person and like to be in the center. Besides I am very well informed about local and...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...my projects was interested by audience. As I do not have any phobia of performance...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.187165775401 0.220444632235 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.155080213904 0.167888034529 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0606518309736 150% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0427807486631 0.0506257000042 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.122994652406 0.118615021944 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149732620321 0.107062808482 140% => OK
Participles: 0.0213903743316 0.041066498444 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74365377816 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0320855614973 0.0385302599488 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0534759358289 0.0714148451538 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0267379679144 0.0191574576366 140% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106951871658 0.00930345855455 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 903.0 1141.60824742 79% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.134020619 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.53046319177 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279761904762 0.284621296913 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22619047619 0.211203875043 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14880952381 0.133321485273 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107142857143 0.0843313296314 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74365377816 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.622163163488 102% => OK
Word variations: 60.7236090476 62.8969750728 97% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.4300151701 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.7852034708 44.7399317507 38% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 90.9928171075 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.4300151701 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.613754768223 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 36.619047619 37.5504026743 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.11666666667 1.13073093955 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247979230292 0.331212695627 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0381066131669 0.0927372745006 41% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.038240723448 0.0736520305886 52% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554168585857 0.579516596996 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.217224724236 0.180689518051 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894592164285 0.122183219658 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589478481595 0.0765303033291 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.147804173362 0.211926503985 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0600503768047 0.0737400523855 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161159135857 0.203819188451 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841822911235 0.067151250289 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.