You heard there is a job to guide tourists in your town for a travel company.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
• How (where) you heard about this job.
• Why you think you are suitable for this job.
• Ask some questions about this job
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to apply for the position of a Tour Guide at Red Road Tourism as it recently advertised on REDTOURISM.com.au . I believe that I fulfill all the necessary criteria and very much hope to consider my application.
I am a tourism graduate with two years' experience working as a Tour Guide at one of the most popular travel agencies . I have lived in this town all my live, therefore I know all about the places of interest and their history. Currently I have been working as a public relations manager , Thus I have excellent experience of dealing with overseas visitors.
My enthusiasm and communication skills have allowed me to act more confidently as a tour guide , and developing amazing relation with both tourists and local communities.
I would be grateful to provide me with more details about the nature of the job: is it a full time or a part time , the salary is it a package or basic and what other benefits that the company offers, For instance Social Insurance , Transportation a ...etc.
My resume is attached and I look forward to discuss the position with you further.
Sincerely
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...recently advertised on REDTOURISM.com.au . I believe that I fulfill all the necess...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... one of the most popular travel agencies . I have lived in this town all my live, ...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e of the most popular travel agencies . I have lived in this town all my live, th...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en working as a public relations manager , Thus I have excellent experience of dea...
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Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to act more confidently as a tour guide , and developing amazing relation with bo...
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Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ls about the nature of the job: is it a full time or a part time , the salary is it a pac...
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Line 8, column 105, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ture of the job: is it a full time or a part time , the salary is it a package or basic a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he job: is it a full time or a part time , the salary is it a package or basic and...
^^
Line 8, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ny offers, For instance Social Insurance , Transportation a ...etc. My resume i...
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Line 10, column 42, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to discussing'.
Suggestion: to discussing
...y resume is attached and I look forward to discuss the position with you further. Since...
^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['look', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262910798122 0.220444632235 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.145539906103 0.167888034529 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0610328638498 0.0606518309736 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0422535211268 0.0506257000042 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0985915492958 0.118615021944 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112676056338 0.107062808482 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0422535211268 0.041066498444 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99445737989 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234741784038 0.0385302599488 61% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.103286384977 0.0714148451538 145% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00469483568075 0.0191574576366 25% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00469483568075 0.00930345855455 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1140.0 1141.60824742 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.134020619 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7 5.53046319177 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33 0.284621296913 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29 0.211203875043 137% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19 0.133321485273 143% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105 0.0843313296314 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99445737989 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.622163163488 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.4711827594 62.8969750728 93% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 12.9587628866 69% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2222222222 16.4300151701 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8515790387 44.7399317507 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 90.9928171075 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.4300151701 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.613754768223 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 7.22680412371 69% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => OK
Readability: 51.2222222222 37.5504026743 136% => OK
Elegance: 1.45901639344 1.13073093955 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176515428336 0.331212695627 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0702335863142 0.0927372745006 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0512128237364 0.0736520305886 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.74005391517 0.662452444078 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.206914460216 0.233577193048 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653618166517 0.122183219658 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052351026219 0.0765303033291 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.158201256125 0.110270004696 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0398839527666 0.120535355502 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963413265553 0.120397337282 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393821642128 0.113578534861 35% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.54639175258 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.0824742268 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.62886597938 38% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.25773195876 97% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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