You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear sir or madam,
I would like to draw your kind attention towards the problem which I am facing at the moment with my current roommate.
The situation has reached to that level where it has become unbearable for me to live anymore in this room.
Firstly, He often invites his friends usually at late night in the room and whenever they arrive they not only create the mess but also play the loud music on television and radio which often makes it next to impossible for me to study for my exams.
Finally, I would be grateful, if you can allot me a single or a shared room with another students who is calm and peaceful because it would allow me to prepare efficiently and effectively towards my exam.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Regards,
FaizalReza
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 642.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61870503597 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38452040899 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705035971223 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9526303916 44.8134815571 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.4 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 16.8248392259 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 4.34317383033 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161795998744 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06190484649 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556756115931 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761917319245 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539681024482 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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