You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you return your home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Dear Sir,
It was my pleasure to be your guest and have a business meeting at your hotel last week and I really appreciate your hospitality and substantial meal you provided. I am writing this letter to ask if you would be generous as to do me a favour.
I realised that I had forgotten to take my important documents after returning my home. I think I had put them in the briefcase. It is a black leather briefcase and I believe that I had left it on the bed. You will easily find it if you enter the room.
The papers are extremely crucial to me, as some of them record the financial statements of my company and we must utilise them to predict the net profits in next year. In addition, some documents also cover the agenda of this meeting as well.
I would like you to try to find those documents and send them to me by post as soon as possible.
I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. If you require further information, you can directly contact me by email.
Your sincerely,
David Villa.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Don't always use pronouns as the subject of sentences, like: I , You...
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Goo Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 192 250
No. of Characters: 800 1200
No. of Different Words: 120 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.722 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.167 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.501 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.769 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.229 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.365 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.749 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.231 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tant documents after returning my home. I think I had put them in the briefcase. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, as to, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33854166667 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57035867275 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2880372235 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39303918358 0.216113520407 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123431993063 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839205866041 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191759140366 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892492223182 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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