You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority and say:
– How did you get to know about the plans?
– What problems will your neighborhood face?
– Suggest possible solutions to those problems
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concern with building a new airport in my local area, Wasteria Lane.
All local media broadcast this unpleasant news yesterday and I should mention that none my community are happy about this plan. Firstly, there is a lavish park in my area that is the best place for tranquility and majority of my neighbors spend their free time in this open space, however, for having a new airport, it should be diminished. So you can imagine how much I disappointed when finding it.
Secondly, living near an airport means that people who live nearby should tolerate with all noise of arrivals and departures and it would not be easy for elderly and children. Besides, I heard apart from the negative effect of loud noise, air pollution of the airport has lots of bad consequence on vulnerable people.
There is a local airport just 200 kilometers away from my home. I think it would be a good idea to develop an existing local airport instead of building a new one. In this case, the local authority could take advantages and save some budget.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ex...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'apart from', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214611872146 0.220444632235 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.146118721461 0.167888034529 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100456621005 0.0606518309736 166% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456621004566 0.0506257000042 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0867579908676 0.118615021944 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114155251142 0.107062808482 107% => OK
Participles: 0.041095890411 0.041066498444 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48028513444 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.013698630137 0.0385302599488 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0867579908676 0.0714148451538 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0319634703196 0.0191574576366 167% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0182648401826 0.00930345855455 196% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1132.0 1141.60824742 99% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.134020619 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68844221106 5.53046319177 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29648241206 0.284621296913 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236180904523 0.211203875043 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145728643216 0.133321485273 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0854271356784 0.0843313296314 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48028513444 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668341708543 0.622163163488 107% => OK
Word variations: 72.1481796839 62.8969750728 115% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9 16.4300151701 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.590873733 44.7399317507 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 90.9928171075 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.4300151701 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.613754768223 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 43.5180904523 37.5504026743 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.32786885246 1.13073093955 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294752720449 0.331212695627 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0620587411481 0.0927372745006 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0458012577448 0.0736520305886 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.640875073846 0.579516596996 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.219294335663 0.180689518051 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117917337734 0.122183219658 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338204058699 0.0765303033291 44% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.149640778351 0.211926503985 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0487430303301 0.0737400523855 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168593255093 0.203819188451 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257661109232 0.067151250289 38% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.