You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that needs fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter
explain your situation
describe the problems with the house
say what you would like to happen
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I want to let out my room for the rent, and it is already being shared by two person excluding me. However, I am looking for one more student who can easily gel with us.
First of all, I am living in a gigantic villa which has four huge open flowing bedroom houses, out of which three of them are already in use. The house also needs an extensive repair which is unbearable for me at the moment keeping in mind that I am not employed in full time work.
Secondly,There are many areas in the room that needs to be fixed. Water is leaking from the roof, and it has caused a stain on the surface of the wall. Apart from this, the geysers always stops working after every 2 weeks and the situation is still the same.
Thirdly, I would like to request you to help us in finding a new person for our villa who can easily fit in to our house and also who do not engage in any negative activities. Kindly arrange a meeting with even landlord well since I want to highlight this issue to them.
Thanks
FaizalReza
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
..., and it is already being shared by two person excluding me. However, I am looking for...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...eping in mind that I am not employed in full time work. Secondly,There are many areas ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , There
... employed in full time work. Secondly,There are many areas in the room that needs t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24154589372 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17385936595 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647342995169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6305693725 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 4.34317383033 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237261329826 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663537286608 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528266392692 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121860403859 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617928318986 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.