You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write any addresses.Begin your letter as follows:Dear………………………A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear………………………
A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house
tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening

Dear, Karen.

To begin with, I want to say that I am really looking forward to your arrival. Unfortunately, I will not be able to meet you in person at the train station because my boss has suddenly sent me to the neighboring city to settle some problems which are connected with company's business. I am going to return to the home city at the evening. Don't be upset, I know that you wish to see me as soon as possible but the trip is inevitable so, please wait till the evening and I will be all yours. In order to alleviate my feeling of guilt I have made some arrangements which will make you feel comfortable.

Firstly, my best body will wait for you at the station, he will help you with your baggage. I gave him your cell-phone number and show him your photo. I will easily recognize him because the friend has striking appearance - he is tall, bald and his hands are covered with tattoos. He looks frightening but you ought to believe me, he is a really nice guy. He will handle you your keys from the house. Please remember that the big key has a secret - in order to unlock the door, after you turn the key two times on the left, you should turn it half way back.

So, it is a time to say you goodbye because I have to go, my duty calls me.

Your loving brother, Eugene.

P.S. I can't help but think about your upcoming meeting, I think that we will order a big classic pizza, several cans of unhealthy coca-cola, we will set in the kitchen and talk all night.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...return to the home city at the evening. Dont be upset, I know that you wish to see m...
^^^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... Your loving brother, Eugene. P.S. I cant help but think about your upcoming meet...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, really, so, i think, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28113879004 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29803718756 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9056347786 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9285714286 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295179381494 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100811698214 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622272740832 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127775845475 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892932386567 0.0580467560999 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.