You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Describe the training course you want to doExplain what the company could do to he

Dear Sir

I am writing this letter to express my interest in pursuing an advanced certification course in Foreign Exchange Management that will be very beneficial in my job functioning.

This is a two-week programme that provides a brief outline of how foreign exchange works in this dynamic business environment. As it is directly related to my work and the banking industry worldwide, I find this course very useful to enhance my analytical skills that will eventually boost the productivity of my work.

In order to acquire these necessary skills, I need to go to the national capital for attending this session. I request your approval to join this course. Along with this, I also want to know that if I am eligible to get reimbursement for the expenses incurred as per the human resources department guidelines.

Upon successful completion of this advanced certification, I will be able to assist a variety of customers. Moreover, our sales number will increase dramatically as this certification will fulfil the statutory requirement to sell forex products to clients.

I hope you will consider my request and help me to get this done.

Thanking you

Yours sincerely

Param Sabharwal

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
... the expenses incurred as per the human resources department guidelines. Upon success...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22564102564 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06281380472 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5498763599 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.9 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182882881491 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756236070623 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465694945284 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862059284034 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304328639372 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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