You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding purchase of few electrical items from your shop. I am a resident of green village which is 13 kilometers far from your shop. Last week I came to Mumbai to buy some clothes and I had a chance to look into the products. I was impressed by the quality of the goods available. Surprisingly, you have imported electrical items across the globe. Construction is in progress for my new bungalow and I am looking for a reliable source. I would need 20 LED lights, 7 Air-Conditioners and 4 heaters. Please let me know whether the above mentioned items are in stock. I will pay the advance amount at the earliest.

I would like to place an order and know the tentative date of delivery. Can you please provide me a quotation for the necessary items and send me today? I will call your contact number for further proceedings. Also, let me know the maximum time that you can hold the goods. I would be pleased if you could give me warranty and service for lights, Air-conditioners and heaters. Looking forward for your reply. Feel free to call me for any inquiry.

Yours’ sincerely,
Chitra

Votes
Average: 8 (7 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6455026455 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78369236782 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.549743669 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.5333333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137133386905 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044045993229 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316533865261 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726048374118 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051803794331 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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