Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well known people.
Hello, Mr. Thomson,
I am very glad to connect you after very long. I have learned that you are organizing an event where renowned speakers will be coming for delivering their speech for which you are inviting the nominations from your reader members.
I am very glad to nominate Mr. Robin, who is a philosopher and councilor. He wrote very good articles on current hot issue of early divorce in young generations. He is very well known in our district and i wish to provide him platform where he can put his views and his experiences about the big social issues.
I think you are also appreciate my suggestion, as your 90% of members are fall in 20 to 35 age group as well as our city is industrial hub for our country and this type of eye opener session needs to be arrange.
This is very big concern of our society and all parents are worry about their children. They are trying their best for this issue. Now days the attitude and psychology needs to be change of all citizens as we are citizens of developing country. This problem will knocking our door very soon. To act before time is the smartest way to avoid critical situation in our life and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nominations from your reader members. I am very glad to nominate Mr. Robin, who...
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Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... is very well known in our district and i wish to provide him platform where he c...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...g social issues. I think you are also appreciate my suggestion, as your 90% of members a...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'knock'
Suggestion: knock
...f developing country. This problem will knocking our door very soon. To act before time ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ical situation in our life and society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235807860262 0.220444632235 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.174672489083 0.167888034529 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0698689956332 0.0606518309736 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0655021834061 0.0506257000042 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.122270742358 0.118615021944 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10480349345 0.107062808482 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0436681222707 0.041066498444 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43641617647 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0349344978166 0.0385302599488 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0524017467249 0.0714148451538 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0131004366812 0.0191574576366 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174672489083 0.00930345855455 188% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1170.0 1141.60824742 102% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.134020619 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49295774648 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78085437643 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.262910798122 0.284621296913 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211267605634 0.211203875043 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150234741784 0.133321485273 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0657276995305 0.0843313296314 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43641617647 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62441314554 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 63.6768565734 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3636363636 16.4300151701 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9895094313 44.7399317507 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.363636364 90.9928171075 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.4300151701 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.613754768223 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.09278350515 239% => OK
Readability: 40.490396927 37.5504026743 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.06024096386 1.13073093955 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198640158928 0.331212695627 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0776591067045 0.0927372745006 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645525595446 0.0736520305886 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.557321576796 0.579516596996 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202234905607 0.180689518051 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751439850806 0.122183219658 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523020041026 0.0765303033291 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.196606854704 0.211926503985 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105009110276 0.0737400523855 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131005225824 0.203819188451 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03318995384 0.067151250289 49% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.