Your local newspaper would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers. Readers are being encouraged to make suggestions sent in an email to the newspaper. Write an email to the newspaper. In your email
- suggest a topic that you think would be popular
- say why it would be of interest
- explain why it is more relevant/ interesting that other topics
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to the new feature that your newspaper is planning to introduce for the readers. As most of the topics are already covered in the daily columns, I would like to recommend to add a weekly movie review column in the newspaper.
Every person has a tendency to look for a review of the movie which he or she is planning to watch. This column will provide them answers to all their questions about the performance and rating of the movie. All the readers will be glad to read about the reviews provided by the critics.
Moreover, people like to invest their money and time on a movie which is of interest to them. Since all the movies are released on weekly basis, this weekly feature will be perfect to report the movie's performance at the next day of the release. All other topics like politics, sports and job requirements are already printed by the newspaper daily.
I hop you will consider my suggestion regarding the feature.
Yours sincerely,
Manmeet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend adding'.
Suggestion: recommend adding
...d in the daily columns, I would like to recommend to add a weekly movie review column in the ne...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o recommend to add a weekly movie review column in the newspaper. Every person...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
...y feature will be perfect to report the movies performance at the next day of the rele...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73184357542 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43466481713 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4204743051 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190166616763 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714358659559 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496645597846 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109809607347 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820703243272 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.