Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is a significant element influences our life. Because It is motivation and stimuli to do something what we need during our life. But as everyone varies from one another, like their perception too, therefore there is no any exactly accepted definition for that.
Talking of why it is hard to define associates with we differ from one another. So perception of happiness vary in all of us. For instance, while happiness means having wealth and material success for someone, it is being lovely and literate for other ones. In my personal life, happiness is getting more knowledge, discov...
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Thank you very much, May you
Thank you very much,
May you please exactly say why the score was very low :-) ? i need to correct them
Grammar issues. No
Grammar issues. No grammatical errors if you want high marks.
how could i write it in right
how could i write it in right way? Talking of why it is hard to define associates with we differ from one another.
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Happiness is a significant element influences our life.
Happiness is a significant element which influences our life.
Because It is motivation and stimuli
Because It has motivation and stimuli
Sentence: Talking of why it is hard to define associates with we differ from one another.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to with and we
Sentence: So perception of happiness vary in all of us.
Description: The fragment happiness vary in is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace vary with verb, past participle
it was happiness to me.
it was happy to me.
There are some common elements are essential can be adequate to be happy.
Some common elements which are essential can be adequate to be happy.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 273 350
No. of Characters: 1221 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.065 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.473 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.546 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.703 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5