The idea of going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
One of the main discussion among parents and students who have just graduated from high school, is the destination for the best university. Although some believe educating abroad has gained lots of benefits for children, others have been fond of considering just its negative aspects such as hardness in communicating. I myself concur with individuals who are interested in studying at oversea universities for diverse reasons which will be clarified later.
To commence with, in spite of several drawbacks for teenagers who want to study out of their own country, there are several considerable advantages which should not be overlooked. The first significant one is to for them to experience lots of new and exciting stuff. This has led scholars not only to obtain a great deal of knowledge of various subjects, but also their new understandings could be like a learning course in order to teach them how to handle their life even in the toughest problems. In fact, if one eighteen-year-old child decides to study in foreign country, he or she will be able to comprehend many aspects of adult life which could not be understood if they stayed with their parents. This is because of the reason that mothers and fathers do not allow them to do their duties as they always think of them like babies. So, this opportunity has been extremely effective for kids to be on their feet and build their life in a way they have always desired.
In addition, one another aspect of this issue could allocate mostly for individuals who have lived in non-developed countries which is the high chances to get to know prosperous business people and also educated professors. This has absolutely vital to meet those people if a person wants to accomplish something great. For instance, when a student has lived in a poor country such as Yemen, there will be fewer possibilities for them to achieve their aims because of deficit of satisfying prospects in order to help them. On the other hand, if they went to different society, their goals will be easier to pursue by using support of many various kinds of amenities.
To sum up, based on writer’s opinion, even though students have encountered many difficulties through their journey of studying in foreign colleges, it has brought them a huge alteration with hopping for better condition of life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95939086294 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78748154041 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568527918782 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7160331696 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.571428571 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204917210979 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744414676661 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516757222245 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140166677167 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295448472492 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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