In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
It can be seen that technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds in every corner of the world. People tend to use electronic devices and brand new gadgets for communication. Nonetheless, a group of people believe that advancement of technology may lead world to nagative evolvement. If asked, I would disagree on this statement. I believe that IT field have more globally benifits. My points are elaborated in further paragraphs.
Firstly, technology has become an essential part of individul's life. Nowadays, people are more likely to use handy gadgets and modern electronic devices to make their daily life a piece of cafe. For instance, before decade, people used to write letter for exchanging the information and it used to take couple of days or months. On the contrary, the young generation is using email and other useful applications for sending messages quickly and easily. Furthermore, the progressive technology is blessing for banks, corporate world and governtment officers to keep the confidential data safe and private. By this, it can be believed that information technology is benificial for every group of people in several ways.
Secondly, not only in household of office chores but information technolgy is playing major role in other departments too. Computers, mobiles phones, ipads and tables, projecters and other devices have made huge variation in educational field. By using latest technology, now it is possible to gain more knowledge about geography and astronomy. Information technology is helping to get the unanswered question about diffrent fields. It is connecting the world in few moments and solving many unanswered questions.
On the flip side, it has fair number of nagatives too. By using more and more electronic devices, it can be addicting and hurt the communication skills. Also,it can cause stress and anxiety. It can be develpo several health issuse due to large amount of using electrical devices.
To put my pen down, IT field is advantegeous and fruitful. It has made many noticible modification in people's lives. Though, it comes with some negative impact too. However, limited and smartwork on this field may lead world to better and convenient lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the latest'.
Suggestion: using the latest
...huge variation in educational field. By using latest technology, now it is possible to gain ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... and hurt the communication skills. Also,it can cause stress and anxiety. It can be...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...e stress and anxiety. It can be develpo several health issuse due to large amount of using ele...
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Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...ical devices. To put my pen down, IT field is advantegeous and fruitful. It has ma...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oticible modification in peoples lives. Though, it comes with some negative impact too...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30681818182 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93197233562 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4575014901 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.72 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.08 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172626650322 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044541450096 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384794207056 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909222103505 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328311457129 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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