Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Why could this be Should governments give more financial support to local film industries

Essay topics:

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films.
Why could this be?
Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Most of the people, nowadays, love to watch the movies for their entertainment purpose. In that context, some people opt to watch non-native movies over their own country movies. In this essay, I will discuss the reason behind this cause and how can the government help them financially.

To embark, There are several reasons for opting foreign movies. In which, the first thing is that these movies she seems to be more realistic. As foreigner made high budget movies, by which they made every single scene of the movie like, that scene is happening is in real. For example, The Matrix movie movie which is a science fiction movie which in Reality, that kind of thing never happens but they give them such a look that it appears more real to the audience.

On the other hand, the government may prefer various ways by which they can support the filmmaker. The government may widen the the scope of films by providing funds to to those students who are pursuing their studies in this field. As it is seen that in many countries, not very much exposure has been given on it. Next thing, the government can provide loan to the producers of a film, so, that they can make the movie of international level.

In conclusion, I want to conclude that every movie teaches us something either if it is of another country or our but apart from this, we should not have to forget our native films.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, apart from, as for, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64919354839 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34911132377 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7945979916 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0833333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167861966781 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597202514009 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361273307325 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902892462876 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555293709969 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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