The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer
over the recent years, the increasing amount of communication and media has affected people’s life in a several ways. The vast amount of information from newspaper, radio and TV has made us not only up to date with the contemporary societies but also more dependent. Although, I agree that mass media has a significant importance in today’s dynamic world, it is not free from the probability of bringing serious consequences due to the exaggerated information it deliver.
To begin, with the development of information technology and sophisticated printing material, the flow of news is becomi...
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Thank you for your
Thank you for your reply.Really appreciated. I am always stucked in writing parts.I am not able to raise my score beyond 6.5.
You have some issues on
You have some issues on grammar. Read a good grammar book. You are ready to get 7.0 or 7.5.
Thank you.I will improve my
Thank you.I will improve my grammatical error.But just wondering does it take long time to improve?Also is the level of my grammar is too low or a medium?Please suggest me some ideas to overcome it.
1. The grammar is not a big
1. The grammar is not a big issue for you, but you need to remove grammatical errors first. Find a book to read, and then after finished essay writing, double check grammar errors.
2. Still you need to develop better sentences. That is the second step.
due to the exaggerated information it deliver.
Description: The fragment it deliver . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace deliver with verb, past tense
Sentence: Public have no time to go through the actual scenario and investigate the news rather they have to rely in newspapers, TV and radio.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to Public and have
This can severely affects its potential investors
This can severely affect its potential investors
Sentence: For instance, the media can overstate the financial operation of a company where most of the shareholders belief remains.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to shareholders and belief
played an important role in product advertisements
played an important role in producing advertisements
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1459 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.174 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.084 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.533 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.563 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5