Now, many scientific institutes conduct research on live animals. Some people regard it as cruel and unnecessary while other people believe it is justified in the interest of human welfare. Discuss both views and give your reasons.
Many people see eye to eye with each other that research on live animals is very non-essential and heartless while others have a faith that those research is very intrinsic because it can meet human's need as well as ensure our health. This essay will discuss both of these views.
Those considering study on live animals as vicious might argue that this can negatively affect our mental health and the morals inside each person can be disastrously deteriorated because somehow, it is also another kind of killing animals. Moreover, detaining them for investigation without thorough care is also a form of violence. More specifically, research on live animals are also inessential. In fact, they are given an injection with poisonous chemicals just to see their responses or figure out their extraordinary genes. Sometimes, it's quite hazardous for these animals may undergo a sudden mutation that can put human in jeopardy.
Nevertheless, study on live animals are also indispensable in some aspects in our lives, especially in medical industry. Actually, nowadays, that the world's population is becoming more and more high-speed can result in the advent of the epidemic all over the world. Therefore, it's undeniable that research on animals can give a hand to experts and scientists to make sure the safety of medicine they are devising before they allow human to use widely. Besides, many research carried out on animals can reveal a great amount of useful information about their amazing abilities such as foreseeing the coming of earthquakes or other natural disasters. Consequently, our lives can be strengthened and improved significantly.
In conclusion, research on animals have both bad and good sides. Personally, this is very helpful and vital to be continued but only in a limited way with a view to protecting the animals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... industry. Actually, nowadays, that the worlds population is becoming more and more hi...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
...hey allow human to use widely. Besides, many research carried out on animals can reveal a gre...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a limited way" with adverb for "limited"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...pful and vital to be continued but only in a limited way with a view to protecting the animals. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, as for, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18855218855 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89756805702 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9119471543 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193716379075 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652271141281 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543606753581 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124351512712 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588938581859 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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