Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life Medium to spread news awareness and for some it acts like a companion What is your opinion about this

Essay topics:

Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?

Communication is a very important factor in today's rapidly growing era. TV is the one of fasted broadcasting unit, Most of the time it is more important than any other broadcasting device.

Nowadays, Every individual is influenced by the TV, because it covers various aspects of life. Earlier days, during the black and white TV, only Door Darshan was used to broadcast which had limited features but it was also very much important at that time. As the technology is changing exponentially, so it influenced TV industry. We can have various models of TV with different size, material and quality. It is directly impacting the life of an individual, hence it is like a companion to many people.

Apart from its uncountable advantages, it has few limitations too. Being a fasted medium for spreading news and awareness it may get used for spreading communal violence, nudity etc. factor which has impact on culture to a great extent. To illustrate that, let us look at the case of riots took place recently in India, it was good, if it would not have been covered on TV. In addition to that, few politicians buying channels to mobilize their party with false commitment.

TV as seen has numerous advantages and benefits to each individual's life. But it is a need of an hour to draw an immediate attention for setting up protocols and policies for broadcasting. Moreover, I strongly recommend awareness among the people that, they should be able to recognize false communications made to them.

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Average: 7.4 (11 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'to a great extent']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253424657534 0.247107548796 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.157534246575 0.15552993741 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0890410958904 0.0946569551029 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479452054795 0.0501201869031 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0616438356164 0.0437536398559 141% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11301369863 0.122223957237 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0547945205479 0.0403219363162 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00582945318 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0342465753425 0.0326786765898 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00342465753425 0.00163938923432 209% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0684931506849 0.0861751148067 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013698630137 0.0214082191602 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00684931506849 0.0119246538136 57% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1513.0 1933.38276553 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 316.052104208 80% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98023715415 6.10592293882 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20519365927 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328063241107 0.37474360046 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272727272727 0.284197041944 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213438735178 0.203843217982 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158102766798 0.137313986986 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00582945318 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664031620553 0.560935902166 118% => OK
Word variations: 77.5175913547 60.7401812628 128% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0911823647 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8666666667 20.7725350517 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8131142981 49.5273876611 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.866666667 93.4120437189 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 15.2821509519 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.594174754866 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01102204409 20% => OK
Readability: 44.1393939394 49.1922392462 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.57692307692 1.69127372897 93% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326853033935 0.332604825255 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0605473690718 0.102734651613 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0451455980793 0.0668474354756 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491692180007 0.534917948617 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122159220884 0.148666948902 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116516858776 0.13441755203 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664164042637 0.0742828286743 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269081536715 0.324241079732 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0314846543382 0.0640056729886 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202022210775 0.22793763319 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569786647276 0.0582452615562 98% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41883767535 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.88977955912 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.60220440882 77% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.493987976 86% => OK

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9