A recent study showed that both developing and developed countries prosper because of the economic growth. People from developing countries are happier than before while people from developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is thi

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A recent study showed that both developing and developed countries prosper because of the economic growth. People from developing countries are happier than before while people from developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this happening? How can this situation be improved? Give your opinion including relevant examples and your own experience

Submitted by Justin on Thu, 04/09/2015 - 21:04

The whole world is progressing by leaps and bounds since technology has appeared in this high tech era. Presently, people of thriving nations are thought to be more happier compared to affluent nations where people were assumed to be more delightful times gone by. Here, I would like to account for causes and remedies to address this worrying concern.

Numerous causes can be put down behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, unlike past, lifestyle has been far more busiest in the developed countries in order to ensure progress and personal achievements nowadays. Hence, people have less in...

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where people were assumed to be more delightful times gone by
where people were assumed to be more delightful as times went by

has been far more busiest in the developed countries
has been far more busy in the developed countries

people are engaged with white colour jobs who have no opportunity for physical exercise.
people who are engaged with white colour jobs have no opportunity for physical exercise.

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Consumption of fast food and sedentary lifestyle has made life unhappy
Or
Consumption of fast food and sedentary lifestyle have made life unhappy

Which one is correct ????

Science and technology are
Or

Science and technology is

Which one is correct