In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Nowadays, for many people who are too busy of working, fast food becomes an important part of their life. However, more and more people are grieving from sicknesses as a consequence of overeating fast food. Some people think that it is essential for government to enforce a higher tax on this kind of food. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this idea.
Some people may concern that by dint of this policy, many small companies or stores, which mainly sell fast food, have to face with a threat of bankruptcy because of higher producing cost. Ironically, only when the government applies this policy, could we reduce the quantity of fast food. For instance, thanks to higher tax on this type of food, many companies will turn their strategy to manufacture other kinds of food, which are healthier. Moreover, the consumer will have a lesser choices of fast food and it leads to the deterioration of fast food in their meals.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that the high tax will impulse the price of fast food. As a result, the consumer will have to suffer this higher price. Nevertheless, only until they have to pay for fast food at a high price, do they stop to buy it. Therefore, they will prefer to prepare food themselves instead of eating fast food. For example, every morning, my mother always design a box, which contains full of rice, meat, vegetable,... for my father's meal at work. On the other hand, by virtue of the higher tax on fast food, the government will have a greater fund to allocate to the health care treatments for victims of fast food.
In conclusion, although taxation policy is always a good approach, the governments need to integrate it with other methods such as education, communication,... to achieve the best result.
Comments
Over past few years,
Over past few years, lifestyle of people has been changed. This trend severely affect the health of the individuals. Most of the people now, are struggling with chronic diseases. I agree with this notion, that changing lifestyle has great effect on the health of people There are some reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, nowadays, life of the people have become easier than before, they doing their tasks with one click of a button thus they invite obesity, the root cause of all diseases. In addition, many people do not have knowledge about healthy lifestyle, that is why these days, they have poor lifestyle choices, such as; smoking, overuse of alcohol, poor diet and stress. These are also the key contributors in the development and progression of chronic diseases. Furthermore, in this competitive world people are running behind money, they have lost their peace of mind and body, as a result they are caught by depression lile diseases. So, all these reasons are sufficient to prove that changing lifestyle leads the degradation of health among the individuals.
Moreover, several useful ways are accounted for overcoming the problemes occurred due to change in lifestyle. First, people can go for nutritional counselling, that includes in various ways to maintain the healthy diet. Second, physical exercise on the daily basis also helps us to improve our health. Further, people can learn the techniques of stress management to overcome the outcomes of heavy workload. Last but not least, government should start some programs related with the lifestyle modification.
To conclude, in my point of view, changing lifestyle has bad effect on the health of the people, like, high level of stress, dangerous diseases and many more, but this can be handled with the help of exercise and good diet.
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