Some people argue that the amount of violence shown in films and on television has led to an increase in violent crimes in society Do you agree with this argument Should the government control what is shown on television and in the cinema

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Some people argue that the amount of violence shown in films and on television has led to an increase in violent crimes in society. Do you agree with this argument? Should the government control what is shown on television and in the cinema?

Nowadays, crime rates has been increased in a city but this is not because of the television shows or the films. It's because the need of an individual has been increased. Therefore, I don't blame the TV shows and movies. They are all here to entertain people. This essay will examine the reasons behind the crimes in a society.

Primarily, unemployment is a major issue behind all the crimes. Since everyone needs money to survive and so they take every possible step to attain it. For instance, in India during the year 1995 to 1999, the amount of crimes had increased considerably and if we exam...

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crime rates has been increased in a city
crime rates have increased in a city

key factors that is leading to all the crimes in the society.
key factors that are leading to all the crimes in the society.

Sentence: Instead, government can increase the employment opportunities by maximising the small scale industries, thereby creating g the jobs for many individuals and meet their requirements.
Error: maximising Suggestion: maximizing

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