Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience;other say it is a waste of time and money.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Planet earth consist of numerous marvels to be explored and nowadays people are more passionate of travelling and to experience uncertainty. There is always a clash of argument,some assert that travelling is a valuable experience while other presume that it is sheer wastage of money and time. In my perspective travelling plays a pivotal and should be done from time to time
To begin with,travelling is something from which one can replete every fascination of his/her. Travelling to new places,meet new people and experience different culture has its own charm. People are nowadays travel frequ...
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Planet earth consist of numerous marvels
Planet earth consists of numerous marvels
People are nowadays travel frequently
People are nowadays traveling frequently
money is solely saving factor
money is solely a saving factor
because one can work at that point of time and saves some money
because one can work at that point of time and save some money
Sentence: Secondly,the mentality of people has been changed drastically over the years because of globalisation and the impacts of westernisation, people nowadays want to explore new places with their cronies or kiths and kins and want to cherish life to the fullest.
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