Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue?

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Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue?

Submitted by Justin on Sat, 08/15/2015 - 00:10

Gone are the days when people were surrounded with the pleasant atmosphere. Nowadays, some people having safety concerns feel insecure even when they are at home or go outside. Here, I would like to account for reasons and solutions to overcome this phenomenon.

There are manifold causes behind this happening. First and foremost, rising crime incidents has been a worrying concern for the safety of people. For example, in some thriving nations, happenings of rapes, murder, robbery and harassment have been the order of the day due to greediness, unemployment , poverty and lower morale. Thu...

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rising crime incidents has been a worrying concern
rising crime incidents have been a worrying concern

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should be sentenced harsh punishments.
should be sentenced by harsh punishments.

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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1630 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.275 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.692 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.992 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.535 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.028 0.07
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WATCHING VIOLENT MOVIES ENCOURAGES OR ENCOURAGE?

A LARGE NUMBER OF VEHICLES PRODUCE OR PRODUCES ?

IS NUMBER WORD A SINGULAR OR PLURAL NOUN ? I M CONFUSED PLEASE TELL ME

EATING FAST FOODS CAUSE OR CAUSES ?

WATCHING VIOLENT MOVIES ENCOURAGES

A NUMBER OF VEHICLES PRODUCE //The NUMBER OF VEHICLES produces

'A number of' is plural; 'the number' is singular

EATING FAST FOODS causes // FAST FOODS CAUSE