Some people say that the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to control violent crimes in society
How far do you agree or disagree this statement ?
It goes without saying that nowdays violence is increasing day by day.it has become serious and challenging problem for society. A lot of violent films are creating by producers.. However, television also is a good source of entertainment . An argument has been put forward that government must control violence in movies and on television . According to me, this statement holds a vaild ground
There are a plethora of reasons why I think government should control violence in films and on television . First and foremost point which comes to my mind that a lot of news base on violence are airin...
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it has become serious and challenging problem
it has become a serious and challenging problem
Every member of family also watch television
Every member of family also watches television
It is bad thing for our society
It is a bad thing for our society
People goes cinema
People go cinema
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Sentence: According to me, this statement holds a vaild ground
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Sentence: In violent movies heroes also commit crime and robery..
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Sentence: I come to this conclusion that violent movies play indispensable role in entertainment but government should make a law for controlling violenc in films in limit
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