Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has had a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills.

Essay topics:

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has had a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills.

The explosion of social media has completely changed the way people communicate with each other. Whether via laptop computers, advanced mobile devices, Wi-Fi or enhanced 4G wireless networks, we are more connected than ever to everyone we know. While this communications boom has been praised for its benefits, some argue that a negative side effect is beginning to take hold in classrooms that commonly-used devices are suspected of damaging students’ literacy rate and writing acumen.

Admittedly, there are some obvious reasons explaining why such an opinion can be seen as convincing. Young g...

*** The full content of this essay is available to VIP readers

Subscribe as testbig VIP readers and get unlimited access to essays on the top list.

Votes
Average: 8 (1 vote)

Comments

Sentence: While this communications boom has been praised for its benefits,
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and communications

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1838 1500
No. of Different Words: 228 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.022 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.596 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.457 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5