Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives, so it is a waste of time to read newspaper and watch television news programmes.
Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, newspapers and television news programmes have become more popular than ever before. It is argued that they are not helpful and related to daily life whereby it is time-consuming to read newspaper or watch television news programmes. I totally disagree with this ideal.
First, reading newspapers and watching television news programmes helps people to keep themselves up-to-date with new trends in the contemporary world, such as international affairs, and ups and downs of the stock market. For example, the term of entrepreneurs has been all the range in recent years. Reading and watching newspapers about many successful starts-ups documentary arouse the interests of young people who can embrace this trend to run a business. Moreover, updating new trends in the fashion is particularly necessary for shop proprietors. This helps them to understand customer’s tendency and create many marketing campaigns to increase the sales.
Second, people can enhance their knowledge through newspapers and television news programs. For example, nowadays, health is one of the most popular topics of newspapers as well as television news programs. The health information from these sources is plausible which is censored via many experts. The coronavirus outbreak is exemplary which has demonstrated the necessary of newspaper and television news programmes to raise people’s awareness and give people basic knowledge about how to prevent the spread of coronavirus.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that the omnipresence of newspapers and television news programmes has many positive effects on people lives. Hence, people need to make time for reading or watching the news.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5953307393 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02466556757 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575875486381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2135186905 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389228589828 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140423592632 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103385298051 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273462968042 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743232211396 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.