Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed However others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Essay topics:

Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that caging animals in a zoo is inhuman while others feel that it is a best way to save the endangered species from extinction. It is true a conducive habitat can be provided in a zoo, but it would be better if not all the animals unnecessarily confined for the public display.

There are many exotic species which cannot last long in certain climate conditions. Inhabitable places created in zoos and wildlife centuries have increased their survival rate dramatically. In my view, there is no harm in keeping these animals in a place where their life span is prolonged, however, this should not be practiced on fauna who are already living in favourable environmental state. For instance, some of the animals are brought from the wild with the agenda to have financial benefits which is so unfair to the animals and ought to be considered as a heinous act in the eyes of the law.

Some wildlife relatively does well in the forest. Seizing some animals for the purpose of making money is against the nature and could cause, natural imbalance like monkeys, elephants, bear, etc. Needless to say, I think it is evident that people who capture the animals for monetary gain would absolutely fail in providing the suitable surroundings and show the least concern towards their health and needs. For example, most of the zoos do not have basic facilities available at their disposal, and these creatures are tormented by the visitors.

To sum up, every life should be appreciated and is important. The brutal act of bounding these animals and restricting them to go in wild is an offence unless the motive behind this practice is to save their life.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...is inhuman while others feel that it is a best way to save the endangered species...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...able environmental state. For instance, some of the animals are brought from the wild with ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my view, it is true, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84912280702 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63737373684 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0807999384 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215078087922 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710645615325 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440533203314 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125489884523 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555076161945 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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