telecommuting refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expencted to be common for most office workers in the coming decade
how do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?
Telecommuting is becoming popular in many countries. The more widespread telecommuting approach is used by various companies, the more significant it would be in affecting our societies and life-style.
Telecommuting has its own advantages and disadvantages. To begin with, it can omit the time each employee must spend on commuting from his home to his workplace. Furthermore, it saves the transportation cost and reduce the monthly expenditures of workers. For instance, in Tehran it takes averagely 30 minutes for each person to go to his office and depend on the transportation mode he chooses to commute, he would be charged from 5 to more than 100 thousand Toman. Moreover, telecommuting lets companies hire more suitable employees from further distant locations. For example, there are many starts up in Tehran whose workers live in different part of the country.
On the other hand, telecommuting has its own drawbacks. Firstly, it makes companies more dependent on Internet accessibility and technological equipment. For example, an Iranian expert who collaborate in international companies should have access to reliable internet connection and also computer, webcam and other needed tools to communicate. Secondly, it deprives people from face-to-face communication and having deeper mental connection. Finally, it could lead to health problems because it motivates people to stay at home and lay down without any physical activity.
In conclusion, telecommuting has many benefits which outweigh its negative sides. With this in mind, it would be great if authorities could make a delicate balance in using telecommuting in workplaces and implement supplementary policies to cover its disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62548262548 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34296497096 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8746511447 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256833686887 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745942141497 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432362432266 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138349005687 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544233813922 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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