Today people spend more time travelling to work than before.Some people suggest employers should allow employees to do some work from home.Do you think that advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Today people spend more time travelling to work than before.Some people suggest employers should allow employees to do some work from home.Do you think that advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is universally acknowledged that "Work is Workship". People earn their back and belly by carrying out jobs which, sometimes, are far away from their home which consume much time to reach there. It has been controversial that whether allowing employees to carry out some work at home will bring benefits or effect adversly. Here, I would like to assert that this phenomenon offer more pros than cons.

Multifarious points can be put down to shore up my view.To set in, people work round the clock in office and travelling long distances often make them tedious and less energetic. Thus, relaxed s...

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Sentence: It has been controversial that whether allowing employees to carry out some work at home will bring benefits or effect adversly.
Error: adversly Suggestion: adversely

Sentence: In addition to it, employees could priorly access the whole work at home on various criterias.
Error: criterias Suggestion: criteria
Error: priorly Suggestion: priory

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