In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out for work. While some say the children in these families benefits from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents's absence.

No one can deny that the modern style of life of the twenty first century is quite sophisticated and difficult. It is not simple as before anymore and in order to survive and live happily nowadays one should have at least specialized qualifications and professional skills, otherwise even surviving will be almost impossible. In the current competitive-type nevertheless high-yielding type of jobs that require certain levels of expertise, some families started to adopt new strategies to improve their income. the most common one being enrollment of both parents in exhausting and time-consumin...

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1811 1500
No. of Different Words: 227 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.948 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.738 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 138 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.076 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.539 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.039 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5